Writing-Diving Giraffes

In room three, we have been working on a piece of writing called Diving Giraffes. In this writing we had to include figurative language, such as, similes, alliteration, onomatopeya, hyperbili, and verbs and adjectives. This writing was a recount, so we had to write in the correct order of what happened in the video.

The very first thing we had to do was watch a interesting video of diving giraffes, and while doing that we would take notes. Some things we took note of were, how the giraffes looked, their actions, the layout/setting, and more. Next, we get to work, and start writing.

Surprisingly, I enjoyed this writing, considering Im not a fan of  recounts. One reason I enjoyed it was because it was on a very original topic (I am pretty confident you don't normally see a tower of giraffes jumping off diving boards). I also enjoyed it because it is fun coming up with alliterations, similes, and other figurative language. 

Next time I would change the background of my second writing slide, so it was easier to see.